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Friday, 12 September 2014

cross Country

Cross Country I was so scared and excited at the same time cross country was today. OMG! I was so happy because we practiced and most of the time me and my friend were running together and we had come first in yr 5 girls. Once it started the yr 2 and 1 race was first I cheered them on with my friends. So then it was our turn so i gave my jacket to my friends so then me and my friends jogging together as one of my friends raced off so she lost her energy so she had to slow down because she had a big stitch. I told her she was gonna get a stitch but then I still kept jogging and my other friend raced behind me. It is so cool because it does not matter if you win or lose, it’s just trying your best. I came first place and i was proud of myself and my friend came second i cheered her go go as I finished the race.My other friend came third i was proud of all of my friends however I was mostly proud of myself for coming 1st. They tried their best however I came first and i was very very proud of myself and them too.Congratulation to all of those who tried there best well done to all of the people that participated.there was medal for those who came first second third well done everyone.if you didn’t come 1 2 3 there is always next time but thank you for all of those how participating.

3 comments:

  1. I am so happy that you used words like participated to make your story interesting. You need to read it though and put in full stops in the right place.

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  2. same as Mrs Mellick

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  3. Hi Fardosa

    I very like your story about the cross country.

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